REVISED VERSION
CLAY GARDNER
When we redid this page for WirePop, we changed very little. I added Rico's "I'll kill you!" shout because the page seemed too quiet otherwise. Without musical scores and sound effects, the page didn't have the impact it needed.

Besides the obviously improved art and palette, the perspective is much better. I helped Niko with the old version, but by the time the new one had to be done, his knowledge on it was superior to mine. (That doesn't mean I don't still correct him now and again >:D)

NIKO GEYER
One of the most important changes to the revised edition art-wise is the muted palette to me. The old version looked all bright and colorful; I believe the new one looks a lot more moody.

I also like how this is basically the exact same scene, just on a technically advanced level. Subtle changes like the position of Rico's arm made the page a lot more dynamic.