CLAY
GARDNER
This is where some of the real changes begin. In the new
version, this page is replaced with a dialogue
between Gandash and the party. Although I wanted to keep the
circumstances behind this encounter a mystery, the complete
lack of dialogue in the original version made it difficult
to feel any kind of warmth or attachment to any of the characters.
A version of this is seen later, though expanded and altered
into two pages. The new version gives a little background
between Landra (the green haired girl) and Gandash.
NIKO GEYER
I thought Landra's old spell looked boring, so I opted for
something more interesting. She is also chanting the lightning
bolt in an ancient language now.
